“Ms. Richardson, OMG! I am bleeding! I don’t know what happened. Can you see it right there?”
A student rushes over to my desk delicately holding her hand, alarm in her eyes. I can really see the injury that has my student so escalated.
“You are probably going to live.”
“What? That is not very nice to say. You don’t care that I cut myself? Oh wait, it’s chocolate…”
Sigh…
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Ha – totally love this slice! Sounds like middle school? Great job with the dialogue and suspense.
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She is a sixth grader. Oh boy…
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Haha that has been one of my favourite phrases at school and at home! Very enjoyable!
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very good. And I’d’ve never thought chocolate could look like blood, but now that you mention it… Did the child lick it off?
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I don’t know if she licked it off. I was busy trying to get the days started. This youngster always seems to have some emergency…
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I love this….Such drama! You captured it well:-) ~JudyK
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I like the contrast of the urgency in student voice and the calmness in yours.
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